Reviews for Underwater Fireworks |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my word, keep writing! By all means, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This just gets better and better. Please tell me she's gonna kill him. Please. Well, there's one way for you to let me know. UPDATE AGAIN SOON! SF |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This was sweet. YOU UPDATED! YAY! Ok, I'm better now. Great chapter. Update soon! ShadowFane |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. She likes Amber...Wow. What a tangled romance. This chapter was nice. Update soon. ShadowFane |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Nice start. Wonder what's going to happen next...ONE WAY TO FIND OUT! ShadowFane |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the out of order-ness. Starting with the image of the petals, and leading into it, then away from it. Sometimes that seems choppy, but you've done it beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful story. I love it. You did a great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This brings back memories of childhood, I was fond of the ocean. Children can always isolate the beauty in anything.I love this piece. It has such an ethereal tone to it. |