Wow. You are a very talented writer. Incredible.

A dark setting, yet deeply powerful. Portraying feelings out into the reader, bringing out strong emotions. And the classic "sealed with a kiss" ending is the cherry on the cake that completes the poem. You are a very talented writer. Congtratulations.

Oh wow this is so chilling...and yet you've managed to make it sound so beautiful, so flled with devotion. It reminds me somehow of the Victorian times, of lace and gallant lords and elegant speech.

I LOVE the ending. It just gripped me...it's gorgeous. Keep writing.

oh..wow..that was beautiful

no other word to describe it..

keep writing..

i 'Loved' it

;)allie

That was great! Very descriptive and intriguing. Can't wait to read more.

The most beautiful thing... I have read... in a long, long time...

I had tears in my eyes when I got finished reading it... it makes me feel... silent.

If this was your suicide note... then... I don't know. It is beautiful. I have nothing else to say.

Ellen

Wow.

*sits in shock*

"Leaving behind nothing but a crease of my life and a gentle mass of past memories, intertwining with the intricate bruising of my Love in each heart." That is beautiful.

"Pouring into my veins and flashing thorough my eyelids." Amazing description. So vivid.

"I will sing the requiem of the forgotten souls to Lucifer. He will listen." That's really interesting.

Beautiful beautiful beautiful piece of writing. I wouldn't add or take away a single thing. It has a sense of bubble-like perfection to it.

Beautiful.

Keep writing.

i really admire the style.. its a very beautiful poem.. the imagery is also very nice, and clear..