Reviews for Our Lives Are Like That Of A Quilt
toxic-noodle725 chapter 1 . 9/3/2006
oh wow that was very creative. wonderful piece. do keep writing!
scratchmynameinconcretestars chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
that is really good, you are a good writer... and can compare simple things to life.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Nice work, I like this. Write on!

Anna
steev chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
The comparison of life & a quilt (tapestry, etc.) is very cliched, & this poem does not show the similarities in any new way.

The inversion of "are three" and the other instances aren't warranted by any structural or sonic reasons, & only distract.

Also, this is closer to prose with line breaks than poetry- look at it this way:

"Then there is that inner part of us, that part of spirit, of heart and mind that when properly cultivated gives to us true meaning and purpose."