Reviews for Pinup
Flies chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
The haiku is simple, and the thoughts deep. That's about all I have to say about this one, it's nice like that.
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
interesting, however, i have to ask...what are "pin ups"? i feel really stupid though.

MallowsWins chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
I read this twice. The first time I sorta went 'wha?' The second time, I liked it. I don't know what changed, maybe its just because it was different. I like, good job.

C.R. Diamond chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Odd, but Pin Ups are cool.
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
A haiku? A Tanka?

Has the right format, but you haven't specified if it is or not.

cool content, I love Japanese style poetry.