| Reviews for Feathers on the Water |
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  Bloodfang chapter 8 . 11/28/2006 Hun... I know that this story is on hiatus, but... when are you going to freaking post the next chapter up? _ I'm bored, so I just felt like submitting something but still, after rereading it again, I at least want some hint of a chapter being formed other than Madness. Just a thought. |
 aferdeity chapter 8 . 8/26/2006 Ok the devil looks kind? are you satanist or something. its is alright to make angel stories but you really make the baad seem good witch totally defeats the point of the deivl but then again the seemed like tortured souls so I do't understand what you are trying to implement. which is the bad side? oh well though sad the story still rocks! |
| Zephyr chapter 8 . 8/25/2006 wow... this was my first fanfic written outside of a book/anime/story that was already made... this was my first original idea fanfic i have ever read... and i must say... its honestly the best fanfic in general i have ever read... please... PLEASE keep up the good work... |
| dormant account 01 chapter 8 . 8/24/2006 Aahh! This was so good! It wasn't nearly as sad as the last couple chapters you submitted but it was still really really good! I can't wait for you to update! The ending line was perfect! |
| LittleMissWhimsy chapter 7 . 7/18/2006 ooh...the sadness...the next chapter should be from Deamin's P.O.V, so we have to bite our nails and wait to know what happens to Engelique..i mean, Ardentia. |
| dormant account 01 chapter 7 . 7/14/2006 Wow, I was reading this thinking no way! They just found each other! That's so sad, but so well written. And I felt so bad for Deamin! Arg, I think the next chapter should be his... This was an awesome chapter though! Great Job! |
| aferdeity chapter 7 . 7/13/2006 This was so awsome! I finally understand everything. now, he has to find her! |
| dormant account 01 chapter 6 . 6/25/2006 Aw this chapter made me sad..and happy at the same time. I really really like this fic and I can't wait for you to update. I love your writing style - it has a way of keeping me hooked. |
| i.swear.to.drunk.im.not.god chapter 6 . 6/21/2006 Whoa... So Dea is Kaine. And vise versa? I think I feel an oncoming headache. _ Anywho, Update soon! ~ . . .god |
| aferdeity chapter 6 . 6/21/2006 that wasn't that bad it wasn't very adult content at all it would only be rated for older people if they had sex. |
| i.swear.to.drunk.im.not.god chapter 5 . 6/20/2006 This was so... Tragic! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update again ASAP and I'll give you cookies. ~ . . .god |
| Yuffie-Kun chapter 5 . 6/8/2006 Aww, that was cute, but I think the story moved too fast. Way too fast. |
| aferdeity chapter 5 . 6/7/2006 that was poeticaly done but it would be nice if you elaborated more on what her job is and when you said other realm did you mean hell or earth. |
| Bloodfang chapter 4 . 6/4/2006 Firaa... I don' care if you r still on artist high... I want you to at least write SOMETHING! SOMETHING! Plz? |
| aferdeity chapter 4 . 5/31/2006 this is getting complicated but what had happened before? what did she mean it couldn't be dea? was it another dea? |