From the summary I was expecting a typical high school love-hate thing but I was pleasantly surprised. The relationship between the main characters was well developed and realistic. I was expecting more for/about Andrew and the way he behaves because his character wasn't fully developed. Overall it was well written and not overly cliche. Loved it.

p.s I adored Piper and her quirks.

This story was just, wow. It's honestly one of my favourites that I've read on this website, it was just completely amazing and I'm quite sad that it's finished. Piper and Donovan are just perfect, and I wish Donovan was real!

Anyway, kudos on this absolutely beautiful story, I was smiling all the way through! :-)

P.S - The 1967 Chevy Impala is like my dream car, that along with a 1980's Mini and a 1965 Ford Mustang. Why must I have been born in an era with disgusting cars and bad music? I can relate to Piper in her love for Frank Sinatra, also.

I reread this story today because I missed your awesome writing.

What a sweet ending! Love this story :)

I can't believe it's over! This was such a good read, I wish it didn't have to end. What a perfect story to end 2011. Thank you so much, you are so great. I love this story so much. And you too! Thank you!

I truly enjoyed this story and if it were a book I'd buy it! )

I love cliche' stories and I personally love how this cliche' isn't exactly like most...There isn't any over dramatic high school scenes...It's actually borderline realistic! ) LOVE IT!

Tres bien.

Ahhhhh! You took so long for that one kiss! But omg, the story was sweet and totally different than the other clichés I've read on here.

And I'm beginning to think I have a thing for lip piercings now ;)

Xx Roza Xx

William pevensie?

As in, WILLIAM Moseley Peter PEVENSIE ?

This is not really a review for the story (I finished reading it years ago and it still remains as one of my favorites), but a reply to metal butterfly.

YOU NEED TO CHILL THE HELL OUT.

Rather than going on your tyrannical rant on specificity, why couldn't you politely tell the author that she made a mistake? You could have made the same point without the overbearing level of condescension. We get that you're offended, but it's not like she's being ignorant on purpose.

Okay this has to be one of my favorite fictionpress stories ever. This whole thing was one big batch of EPIC. The characters are great and I loved how at the end of every chapter was a little POV from Piper just to let us know how she was feeling. I really truly love this whole story. It was beautifully written. I had such a good time reading it.

-Tilly

This story was awesometastical. I loved it from the first chapter. It was just sweet and cute! I love Piper, although she sort of still need to learn how to open up? And Donovan is just fantastic. Throughout the story you clearly see him changing for the better. I love his sister as well! Thanks so much for writing (:

loved it:)

AMAZING. Smooth, well-written, and intriguing.

I love the way you presented the characters (especially Donnovan and Piper). It was very REALISTIC. They weren't superficial characters; they're multi-faceted with the complexities of real people.

Loved it.

Literally a perfect, smooth read. I'm glad you didn't overkill the bet idea; you used it in a very efficient and meaningful way. This story had me hooked by the very first chapter. Sometimes it did feel a little slow but after Oliver came into the story it all came together very well. Piper's brother was a little underdeveloped I think as a character. I might have liked to see the similarities between him and Donovan be more prominent in the story. I think I also wanted some closure for Andrew too. Jamies character growth on the other hand was excellent. Especially near the end.

You kept the length of this story perfect; a part of me wishes there were more chapters, just to read more about them but while these chapters would definitely be great they'd be unecessary.

Overall, I've favourited this story (on my account lol) and I'll check out your other stories after!