Oh my Lord, I love Donovan. Absolutely and completely-and already, which is odd. I usually don't declare love until at least the second chapter. But the boy is so honest... Anyways, great first chapter. . Can't wait to read more.

ohhthis is getting interesting I have a penchant for smart guys who act dumb Pso... UPDATE!thankies and much love~

this was so...awesome. i liked it, nno i loved it keeo writing

Must apologize. The dog dying part got me more emotional than the fact that Donovan could recognize that Piper was distraught. I happen to have had a somewhat similar experience with my dog Hammer. Got him on my 12th birthday... I was at the city enrolling at school when my mom sent me a message that they found him dead the next day. Was truly less chatty that day. I could really symphatize. Difference was, there wasn't really a Dono in my life then to notice that. P Looking forward on the update. Piper's family seems cool enough. I wonder what's behind the 'bad boy' reputation of Dono. How's his family? Sorry, I'm really an inquisitive person. p

Ooh. Short chappie? ( I wonder what had happened after the three parted? And hmm, that was interesting to note that school jock Jack (yuck, it was definitely a pun not intended) was her neighbor for 10 years. Who are Piper's friends by the way? Did she tell anyone about the bet?

Hmm. I like the style of having Dono's POV first, then putting somewhat a summary of what Piper thought about the whole situation. That was nicely executed.

I must say that this is one of the bettwe written stories in FP. For a first chapter, you've done well in delivering the premise of the story. :) You've quite made the reader want to know things such as: how 'Donny' could have forgotten Piper then, how Piper knew that Donny had a dog...

Speaking of... how did Piper and Dono meet? I thought Dono just got into Piper's school? Hmm... I must read the second chapter hehe.

I'm so glad you finally updated, after making us wait for so long too! tsk tsk! hahaha no that isn't a good combo, but i guess that's just life. Anyway i really liked this chapter...there were parts that really made my lips lift upwards. I have to say Donovon is becoming more and more of a jerk really, what with the whole "I found myself willing to take as much time as necessary to be the conqueror who made it past Piper’s barriers. I wanted the glory of being the first."...but it fits his character...now to see what happens next..i shall wait for the next update!P/s: i'm glad you let the idea work it self out and into writing!

thats so cool!-that she can lip read...the story's awesome too though! lol i think you should have more of Piper's view though? yah well anywayz!

I LOVE IT!

YAY! finally you got the new story out...and its the bad boy/good girl one! teehee..makes me all giggly. Anyway its really good so far already i am starting to discern what makes the two characters tick. I have to say though i think i would like a little bit more sarcasm added to either Piper or Donovon...but otherwise they are really good. The other thing i want to mention before i forget is that i spotted some mistakes, the major one being that you repeated the title "taming of the shrew" (yes i got the literary reference) twice, just pointing it out incase you wish to edit it...anyway..three chapters! i was so very excited! Can't wait for the next one..hopefully it's going to be soon...P.s. thank you for reviewing my 'story' thing...

this is fantastic luv!

extremely well written...fun and engaging characters... and a clear plot...what more could you want?

can't wait for the next chapter!

keep up the good work!

Coco

hm ... cruel intentions meets walk to remember ... interesting. ~ardis