I'd love to see this updates. I hope you haven't completely given up on this, there's certainly something there worthwhile. Please update, if not to inconvenient.

This is definitely a sweet story. I really enjoy this. Joshua and Emily are really cute as a couple, I like how she is still so stubborn. I am certainly curious to see his point of view. I hate to see Christina changing and how she is doing it for a guy. I do like those triplets. I also like how her family is, except how her dad can't seem to remember their names.

I am going to give a great review since I noticed that some people were kinda of harsh in their reviews which I think was unnecessary. First, I really like the world that you developed your story around. Thank you for making your characters ethically diverse! When I starting reading, I was like YES! I get excited when I read some diversity especially on Fictionpress. It is pretty rare. Second, I like the development of your characters. Em and Joshua are pretty interesting and you developed them out nicely. I have a couple of questions about some of the minor characters. I would like to know more about Joseph and I would think that Em would have more interaction with them being in such a small town. In the end, I love the story so write it the way you like because it is great! I hope that you continue this story!

more, now! please?

Homosexuals are great? That statement would be so much more convincing if you hadn't first informed us that describing someone as gay was 'mean' and then listed, as 'signs' of his homosexuality, a series of caricature-level stereotypes. Homosexuals don't like sports? REALLY? Being gay means you like fashion magazines and complain a lot about your fragile self? REALLY? If you're gay, you can't 'help' being flamboyant? WOW. Colour me educated.

You may be a fantastic writer, I won't be able to tell. I couldn't make it past that paragraph.

You promised you'd update soon, you PROMISED!

this sounds like a great story, keep the updates coming!

aww i really like this story. hope you update soon!

i really hope you continue this story because it's so cute and it got my attention right away.

i really like your writing style, and the plot is very original.

please update soon!

i love your story, can't wait for you to continue it :)

No! :( please update as soon as you can!

hey! it's been a while, but i hope you'll continue this!

""It’s a Spanish thing, I guess. Overseas, you’re not supposed to marry outside of your country"" I have lived in Spain my whole life and it's the fist time I hear something so absurd. I agree with fabarati, americans dont know anything about other countries. We live in the 21st century too you know?

AH! I love this story.

Hello fellow Minnesotan! (or are you from out-of-state?)

This story rocks. THANK YOU for IT!

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! I can't stop lasughining! (I can't even type right!)

You ROCK! YOU'RE SO AWESOME! I LOVE YOUR CHARACTER BACKGROUNDS AND EVERYTHING! Tears are streaming down my face. YOU'RE SO AWESOME!

THANKS AGAIN!

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