Reviews for One to Three: The One Depressed, The Rest Reality
Prisoner of my soul chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
I liked this. It's very nice how you make it rhyme. Keep up the good work!
ilovetheopera chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
This is good. I liked the way you rhymed, it gave it a rhythmic feel. but it would be nice if you gave it verses, the no verses made it seem a little endless and if you put verses it mgiht be better.
frayedlifeforce chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
i really like this - it has a nice rhythm and a great flow. 'No, rationality exists one out of four

And the seventy-five percentage just wants more'i loved those lines - they were written really well.
SaRmelLexia chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
i like it!nice work, i couldn't ask more..eventhough i have a bit of confusion in understanding what 'they' are going through though... anyway i like it...btw, i'm one of ur classmate...guess who?