Reviews for The Trespasses
nutbuster chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Interesting story, but I didn't get enough to feel anything for the characters. It's too much of Chris and Gab, and that's probably the intention, but not enough emotion to get the reader-at least me-get caught up.

I hope I'm not too harsh.
ayress chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
I loved it. It was so sad and so real. Amazing job!