Reviews for Cold Heart
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I really liked the simple imagery. It was powerful.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
...sad. but i think there's a deeper feeling inside of this that has yet to surface. like why? but i mean, you're probably trying to be vague and let the reader figure it out for themselves which is good, too. the words were pretty, though.
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Wow intense and dramatically true. I love your short poems, you say so much with such few words.
Felicia Danielle chapter 1 . 9/1/2006
Short. Simple. Beautiful. Wonderful job.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
A concise display of emotion - very nice.
Kavita Najim chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
This makes me think of S&M...go figure
Kusje chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
I think that this eventually could be made into a more.. longer type of poem, but I loved it anyways.

SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
even if you are melting away the passion this peom still sounds kinky
Lovetress chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
Wow. the descriptions were so vivid. This was very well done.
godsandstars chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
beautiful. i loved it.
zamthezombieman chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Well, its not as strong as some stuff Ive read of yuors, but I think about hpw cold marble floors are, and I tink...BR...hahaha, so I think you got your point across, which is one thing i suck at. hahaha, much love: Zam.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Very powerful, I like this a lot. Great work, well done. Vix
free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
oh wow, very good! Keep it up!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
i like the extended metaphor of the cold and really works. such a vivid, striking image.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
I like this. I could see this in my head, who hasn't sat on tiles and felt the coldness that comes through. Wonderfully done.

Keep it up.
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