Reviews for Cold Lying Lips
4NeverAfter chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I understand your pain here and I also understand how hard it was to write this. All of my poems hurt so badly to write that if I had the talent of crying I would have balled through writing them.

I like the raw emotion in this poem. I can feel the anger and the pain. I can also relate to this. My mask of lies has only recently melted, and (lucky me) I've found someone who I don't have to lie to. Very nicely done. Keep up the good work.

PS thanks for recommending this