|Reviews for For Her Eyes Only|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 8/23/2006
This is excellent, I really enjoyed reading this piece. I like how you made it both hopeful and sad at the same time. This is my favorite part:
"Honesty is a dead scene,/Fiction’s what makes the silver screen."
I also like the rhyming, it doesn't seem forced at all to me.
| drippingdreams chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Hey, I like it! I really like the hopeful, sort of bittersweet feel to it. The admitance that yes, you didn't always get along, and being lovers didn't work out, but there are so many good memories. It's amazing that you can look to the good times after a breakup - so many people only remember the drama and the unhappy parts. I especially like the repeated line "don't apologize, it's only a waste of time / thanks for the best days of my life."
I also really like the language and images. Pretty and clever at the same time. My favourite kind. :) Nice rhythm and rhymes, too. It all flows really well, and hardly ever feels forced.