WOW! Wat a great update! i really really enjoyed it! Rakel is such a gr8 character! I luv the way Rakel kicks these guys ass'! You are writting an amazing story here...i am thoroughly enjoying myself reading it! The way you portray all the characters is very intriguing! I am really excited for the next update! I hope the next update will cum soon! really! Alexa xox

I love your story and I'm going to give you a review tekking you just how much when I'm done with all of the chapters thus right now though, I just have a the excerpt below, the name changes from Jem to Tim. Or are there two people?"Jem watched him smugly as he ladled syrup onto his pancakes. By nature, Tim had always liked to see other people unhappy. It made him feel powerful, because he had something they didn’t, something they wanted. It was just so satisfying. And Tim wasn’t the only one who thought that; he had plenty of buddies, guys just like him. But he was their leader."Well done; I simply adore this story.

This was a very good chapter. I like this story very much. It's unique. In chapter seven there were some grammer errors, just to let you know. Very little though. Yoku dekimaskita. *You did a nice job.*

This guy sounds cool, no baiting, no idioticness. Maybe you should feature him later helping her out?

ALso... LOVE the Seven Murderesses! And Electra... didn't know it was a book!

And..."She wanted to murder that son of a bitch" isn't that a bit Out of control for her?

YES! SHE FINALLY HURT HIM! BOOYA!

yay for rakel. jem /did/ have it for a great story; i actually read everything, which is unusual for me as i tend to skip paragraphs. :)

I really like the way you write. It's refreshing to find a piece that doesn't need a lot of dialogue. The remarks between Belus and Rakel are really good, like teenager defiant to parent. The way the memory comes in sometimes is a bit random, but it's always effective. Added to favs!

Great start to the story. That last chapter was great. "Oh, please." Pretty much sums up her didsain for the people in the school. I love how you made the kids like normal kids. And the human dissection bit was funny. Keep writing.

Much love,Aero

Sloppy? AMAZING! I like the chase and confrontation, and also how she doesn't seem to be cowed by the professor- love it. Also, could you possibly elaborate more on the difference between undead vampires and regular vamps? Thanks!-Delaney

PS: Dissect a human. Heehee

Wow! I really do like this so far! I'm really surprised that you don't have alot of reviews! T.T People are so stupid sometimes! Can't even see a good story when they see it! Anyway I shall contiune to read this! Until next time!

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one, and I can't write much because my lap top battery is dangerously low... later!

I love your characters. Even though I want to hit Jem. Though I probably couldn't hurt him at all.

So I guess I'll find out later. Going to continue reading so not much of a review.

When Jem first came him. You started calling him Tim. ON purpse I have no idea.

Good Start. Interesting. How is she from a vampire clan and not dead? I think I confused myself. Maybe the next chaps will clear it up for me. ok I did. Whats the difference?

Found some little mistakes.

then he would not waist time attempting it. *waste

one more mistake somewhere but I don't remember where.

This is a very interesting story, I must say. Your characters are great, and I always love the whole vampire academy idea...

What an interesting take on vampires! I have never thought of a school...wow! And I love how you've reinvented the vamp myth :) Can't wait to hear more from Belus! I like him~

Keep writing, it's marvellous.