After reading the fifth chapter, I have to admit that I'm a bit disappointed. That there wasn't more written. I enjoyed what I did read though, I like the way your characters seem to fit so seemlessly into the fabric of the story. I had to stifle a laugh when I read the first chapter though. I started writing a story about an academy for vampiric youth a few years ago.

I imagine you've done a much better job at it than I could have.

This is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I want to KILL jem, though, or at least have him taught a lesson... anyway, happy writing!

I really do like this story. I love the characters! Yay for the stoic type. Kepp it up, can't wait for more!

Awesome Job i loved it

it was great looking foward to reading more!

This is very good. I'm looking forward t finding out more about your story, and the characters within.

great chapter once i like the explanation of different kinds of blood. :D

wow, i really am impressed. i love the character build up so far. keep it up, yo. can't wait to read more. :)

absolutly brilliant! This story is really interesting..completly different tot the other stories that I have read! I feel sorry for Rakel but I think she is an amazing character! Its a really entrancing stary! I am thoroughly enjoying myself! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! alexa xox

Well, even if I am the only reviewer I really do like the story a great deal. I am excited to get to know Rakel better, she seems really quite interesting!

Kick Ass! This is looking really good. I am a little confused about the differnce between undead and alive vampires. It is all a little tricky to me. Such as, if alive vampires have sharpened canines, do they drink blood?This story is looking great!