Reviews for Male Order Concubine
Guest chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
Kuroyuri chapter 6 . 2/6/2010
Okay~! Best original fic I've ever read! In my opinion, it's even better than most published books I've read. Well... come to think of it, it's the best modern story I've read. Unlike SOME (most) of the stories I've read, this one doesn't seem... how to put it? Awkward at all. It seems to flow really smoothly, and I want to read more so bad I could mug someone! So please update it really really really soon!
Selene noeturna chapter 4 . 9/1/2007
hey, awesome start of a stoy. I really enjoyed it. The title was iffy, but when I began to read it, I totally loved it. Hope you update soon!

I think Keita would look even more adorable without his glasses..._~
Daigaisai-Taren chapter 6 . 7/10/2007
I like the story, I like the concept. but some of the sentences didn't make a lot of sense, it was sometimes hard to follow. Also, there are issues with changes in tense. I'd reccomend having someone you know read over this and make corrections...
Silver Edged Fantasy chapter 6 . 6/27/2007
This is entertaining, I like it. I hope you plan to continue it soon.
Kidiu chapter 6 . 6/7/2007
Well, I hope you continue! Great story!
DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 6 . 6/1/2007
Nice story please update soon.
Cealex chapter 6 . 4/4/2007
LOL this is freaking hilarious! Please write more! You haven't updated in like 6 months now T_T;
Finnyh chapter 6 . 11/22/2006
LMAO! THIS WAS HILAIRIOUS! LOVE IT! ALEC HAS SUCH A CHARACTER AND "SMALL FRY" (FANTASTIC! ) IS SUCH A GEEK! I really enjoyed reading this and I know there is a lot to build up to but when are they going to "get married" and all that? Hope it's soon. Anyways, later!

Derek x x x
candyaddict chapter 6 . 10/28/2006
oh Amen! you came back!
Kamiko-Miha chapter 6 . 10/4/2006
YAY! You finally updated! I though you discontinued it or something...Oh well thanks for the update!
crissy chapter 6 . 10/4/2006
this is hilarious!
Shiroyuki Hikari chapter 6 . 10/2/2006
another funny and delightful chapter...can't wait for more revelation in the story ;)
zephyrlight chapter 6 . 10/2/2006
oh god XD that musing on how "daddy mcGarrett" is going to "pay" was hilarious! I was expecting bloodshed (and plenty of it), but your literal take on "pay" was like, omg-I loved it! what the heck, I'm declaring myself totally in love with this fic Pyou sprained your hand? tough luck-here's to hoping you're all better now and ready to roll out more chapters *grin*
Finnyh chapter 5 . 7/26/2006
LMAO! I had to laugh along with this, man, that made me giggle a lot. Alec and Keita are so opposite...and exactly HOW do they end up togther? (if indeed they do)...well, we will wait and see, eh? It should be really interesting, WHEN'S THE WEDDING! I can't wait for that, it's gonna be totally hilarious!

Great story, I can't wait to see where this goes...another great chapter and I thouroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done.

(salutes) Derek x x x
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