Reviews for Male Order Concubine
zephyrlight chapter 5 . 7/15/2006
lol yet another great chapter Pwhat WILL the result be? lol.. expulsion from the house? Or strict orders straightaway?
candyaddict chapter 5 . 7/12/2006
b-r-i-l-l-i-a-n-t work.
candyaddict chapter 4 . 7/7/2006
without a doubt, brilliant!
Finnyh chapter 4 . 7/2/2006
WOO! This is hilarious! I love it. I can't wait for the shounen-ai bit, if indeed there will be, damn I hope so...(that's sounds odd coming from a guy, right?) Oh well, youre brilliant! I love the contrast between the charactors, it was well executed. Bravo! Update soon! Derek x

*adds to favourites*
zephyrlight chapter 4 . 6/29/2006
KEITA'S SHORTER?ummthen yeawhy is Alex the one in..the..kimono? must have looked funny all the same Pcontinue updating!
Shiroyuki Hikari chapter 4 . 6/28/2006
This is downright hilarious! I can't wait for more :)
zephyrlight chapter 3 . 6/21/2006
oh...heheupdate soon! this is a really fun read-what will their first impressions of each another be like? and what do they look like respectively? update onegai!
Nanao Nagase chapter 3 . 6/18/2006
Another great chapter, this one was funny as well. The descriptions were interesting.. (bed from a porn film..! (snickers)) Can't wait to see the guys meet at the airport! Update soon.

Nanao
Finnyh chapter 3 . 6/17/2006
Hiya, may I just say that this story is great! I really enjoyed reading it and I can't wait for the two guys to meet. It might be strange hearing this from a lad, but I think the manga genre is interesting read and write. Thanks for a great read and I hope you can continue with it as I'm sure you will. Best of luck, will be reading again soon. Derek x
candyaddict chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
lol. your Keita character is perfect! He seems so typically asian. you are so spot on!
Onaji Choji chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
That was amazing! You should definately update soon. I love your writing style and the characters are both very well thought out. Can't wait to read more
Nanao Nagase chapter 2 . 6/2/2006
Hairpins that are lethal... that was a good one. This chapter was great, and Mr J...awesome behavior. And what's the big surprise? Can't wait for the next chapter... update soon!
candyaddict chapter 2 . 6/1/2006
whoa. eye-popping plot! almost out of an anime. keep updating please!
Abstruse Blue chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
What kind of suprise, what kind of suprise? XD
Rubadub chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
This chapter makes me glad that my Dad doesn't play poker... and on the internet with top-Japanese businessmen no less. Where ever did you come up with an amazing idea like this? It sounds like it will have quite the interesting and witty plotline and I'm eager to see what happens.

I like the story so far and I do hope you continue it~
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