Reviews for It Was Only Summer Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Would it be possible to get you to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ Two new chapters! And where have I been for them...? Sadly... Not here. _;; I've been writing fanfictions lately.. Nehh... OH! Yeah. Chapters YAY! But, as everyone else has pointed out: description! Other than that... It is yay. - Peach Mouse |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job, but as everyone I still think that more description is needed, but the plot seems great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() too short. More description is also in order, but good job so far. BFQ UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good dictation. Maybe more description? BFQ ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm interested in where you plan on taking this. The only thing is that this story seems to be really outweighed by dialogue. I'd really like it if you would put some more detail into the story, so that I understand what the characters look like, and also so that I can get a better idea of the area of California where she's staying. I think longer chapters would be awesome, but that's up to you. And to me, it seems like these first two chapters couldn't be combined since they're so short, but I'm not complaining. This is your story and I still will read it whether you take my advice to heart or not. And I don't say this about many stories, either. I'm interested in another chapter. Maybe update soonish? That would be really wonderful. Faded Soulfire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tayylloorr. It's Leah, coming to haunt you. _ Anywho. You really should continue... Or I'll die! ...Or force a shounen-ai roleplay on you! Teehee. So continue, for both of our sakes! PS. Go and read my stories too! -A very Dakotalicious story- Peach Mouse |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this might get interesting, and I like the way you write! I was just left clueless about Kaitlin's and Tyler's appearance, maybe you could describe them next? Keep going! |