|Reviews for Sadistic|
| Reaper chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Hmm...is okay compared to most of your other work. I'll note this in mind.
| Pumpkin4565 chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
suck your as.s elizabeth ugly
| writergurlLW chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
maria stared at...
| Elochai chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
I'm going to keep this story in mind because it looks promising. ;
I'd like to add that you're doing alot of character development in the early pages which is good - But I think you should choose one PoV for it, because the change is disorientating and distracting, just a little.
That and I can't wait for them to stop talking.
Anticipation of the title. Thank you for this story insofar.
| BobZombie chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Aside from it ending in the middle of a sentence, it was awesome :) Definitely keep writing!
| hired chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Freaky, but the chapter ended on an unfinished note. It's definitely well-written. I applaud your originality. _