|Reviews for Paradise Lost|
| Michael Panush chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
That was very will written, and a little freakish. Transhuman combinations of man and machine are always wierd, and this is no exception. I think it's kind of odd that you just theorize all of these developments coming from the creation of a human/machine hybrid, and there's not much of a link. If the story flashed forward to the future, to see if this glorious technocratic wonderland came about, or not, that would give this story a bit more closure. Other than that, I enjoyed it a lot. It had a great concept and fantastic writing.
| Alankria chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
A strong end there. It feels like the beginning of something much larger.
| Domina-Alearum chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Wow. This story gave me shivers. Excellent. I liked the little introduction to background at the beginning.
| Marinus chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
A superb piece of work - intriguing and definitely worth a follow-up.
I can find no glaringly obvious faults here - just what I'd expect from you. Would also like to thank you for 'SciFi for Dummies' and 'Martial Arts For Complete and Utter Morons'
Like the Voltaire quote. Keep writing.
| Shadowhound chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
Interesting story. Is this a stand alone or the beginning to a new story? Either way you did an excellent job with this.