this is totally weird, but totally amazing and surprisingly realistic

This is brilliant. JUST awesome.

I see that this was written quite a few years ago, so I'm not sure if my comments will be read, but I just want to say that I really enjoyed this! It's unique and funny, and I'm so happy I stumbled upon it.

HAHAHA pretty cool short story :)

hahaha, very different, I like! :D

Very creative. I liked the realism and the total strangeness of your story.

WOW ! You just made my favorite story list !

Have a medal, have two !

Critiquing ?

Nice paragraph breaks, good spelling, and GREAT story !

"God is dead." Well, maybe not entirely, but she's certainly not very good of hearing today !

This is hilarious. And smart. It's a lovely, lovely change from the current overabundance of supernatural/vampire/werewolf type drivel. Bless you for being original!

love the concept behind this story!

love it, though i was hoping for more toilet humour.

Funny enough I happened to like this piece.

Don't know why really but...it works :)

Very cute. Nietzsche would be so proud.

Good random stuff you write.

I'm so glad you didn't let down your one-shots.

Thanks for bringing it to fictionpress - Therese

that was awesome! i loved it. i know it was very cliche' romantic comedy wise (nd i konw u know it too), but i loved it due to its uniqueness with the toilet graffiti. i mean, its not impossible for someone to fall in love over some toilet graffiti, is it? nywas, i loved it. good job, that was great.

Oh, hahah, this is just freakishly brilliant. I grinned so wide at the end. It had the most perfect mix of humorous thought and moments of "your being stupid". Thank you, very much, for the marvelous time I had reading this.