Reviews for Toilet Humour
Sarsaparilla chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I think it was lovely. The last line really clinched it all...and I absolutely love the characters.
blurrylights chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
This was hilarious...unbelievable. The ending, that is. :)
chasing givenchy chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
The summary and the title worked as an effective hook, and the pen-throwing part was hilarious. Yes, it did come off as a little stilted in the beginning, but that's just because the word-choice was moving towards formal when the entire tone and concept was more quirky and informal.

Ooh, I love street artists, and yes, I've seen too many Nietzsche rip-offs in the form of "God is dead." (Once, in Potsdam, I even saw "Is Hip-hop Dead?" O.o Very deep, that one, I'm sure.) Her response though, was brilliant. And HE! by the sacred name of Hashish, he definitely knows how to play hardball.

Once you start describing the mystery artist as tall, dark and brooding, of course it's easy to guess he'd be the exact opposite. While I definitely like what he turned up to be ("I really thought you were going to be Swedish" anyone?) but he didn't literally have to be the physical opposite of what she was imagining, did he?

Overall, the concept is rather familiar, but the execution is a plus.
Cafune chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Hahahaha! Favorite. I would love to have a conversation with someone on a toilet cubicle wall!
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Come on, it's real funny! Very good, give yourself a round of applause.
avocado oil chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
Heheh. I'm glad it ended the way it did.
Jubileyn chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
This was awesome, original, and cleverly ended. Five stars! :D
emerald chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Wow, haha, that made me smile. That's quite a way to meet your soul-mate. And aww, just oh so believable and quirky and sweet. If nothing, the chat will be quite interesting for both. Kuddos for being original!
gulistala chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
I loved this! It was quite hilarious- especially Charlotte! D

Katie Valentine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Hahaha, this is interesting! :D I like it. Unique one-shot.
d666lisa chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
Lady Katreina chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
I'm sorry, I cannot help. However I can say that I like it, lots and lots.
Akima chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
It's kind of funny because I've been to your profile on DeviantArt before, though without commenting and I didn't actually realize it until now, when I read this story, because I knew for sure that I'd read this story before. And I have read it on deviantart and remember that I really liked it then also and I had actually planned to comment, but just haven't gotten that far. But now I'm commenting here.

Anyway, I think this story is great and very wellwritten, entertaining, funny and romantic. As in the other stories I've read by you (without commenting, sorry), the characters are real and the tale is cute and easy to read and reread. I enjoy your writing style and the cubicle conversations on the wall. And I also like the title, it's quite appropriate.

Well, I have nothing more to say and I've probably rambled way too much, but great work and I'll start actually commenting on DeviantArt, because that is usually preferable anyway :)

Have a nice day!
Pinkamoo chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Jolly good show! Jolly good show! Ok enough with the eccentricities! But you did a very good job, it was well written. :)
Lily Llynn chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Shorter than I thought it'd be, making it kinda an abrupt stop, but cute and sweet. (: I like it! *adds to c2* (:
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