Wow! That was amazing and so creative! I loves' it! Oh dear I didnt quite get to the end I got to where the boy was nocking at the door and bitching. But your a hell of a fucking writer. Hard to find those nowadays. All these faux sucessful emo loserette writers, babbling on as if they had something interesting and new to say. It's like some type of primal instinct for them, to write crappy poetry and writings that sounds all the same, like how whales know where to find each other for a good fuck like once a year... Amazing... Please get back to me, and I would so aprecaite a review from you!

ciao

-coon

...years later the scene picks up again...

"Mom! Dad! PLEASE can we not pretty please paint our bathroom...I have friends coming over and all those words penned marking the walls...I am SO embarressed..."

That was hilarious and witty. Much appreciation for posting it :)