This is brilliant. I loved the story, everything about it. And THANK YOU for that closure. The ending was wonderful. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing.

This was actually a really good story. I don't normally read such short ones, but I couldn't find anything else so I gave this a try and I was pleasantly surprised. Good job :3

My mind is made up. Lara is crazy.

...The hell? Kabran? Is he the bad guy, the good guy, just a hallucination?

Okay, I'm hooked. Who the hell is the boy in the mirror, and how did Lara's parents die?

Okay, I rarely review, but I just have to for this story. The way you've written Lara's emotions is amazing, especially since it's written in third person, and the boy in the mirror is so intriguing that I just have to read on. Keep up the good work!

Wow, this was a great story, pretty dark but with an ending that seemed complete :)

Wow, this is actually such an interesting story, love the characters and the actual idea too. The twist of Kabran repeatedly finding Lara's past lives and convincing them to commit suicide is just so epic XD

I ended up liking the ending a lot more than I thought. You wrote it well. I think your characters were interesting and there were a lot of depth to them. I loved Kabran even when he was a mean jerk. This was a well written novel that I really enjoyed! Thank you for sharing it!

Love love love the ending! I'm glad it wasn't just an epilogue. By the way you missed the word cut or slice in the sentence "This guy claims his knights can a penny in half."

I love this so getting so good and ill admit I cried once oh and it reminded me of Fall out boy.. they have a song called Get busy living or get busy dying(do your part to save the scene and stop going to shows) :)

Thank you for this particularly lovely story. True, it's not the most flattering account of emotions; but you have done an absolutely brilliant job in nurturing your characters and most importantly, your story. I hope that you continue to write, seeing as you have a flair for it. I'll keep an eye out for your upcoming works. :)

I truly adored this story. The plot was original, the characters memorable, and the writing fantastic. :)

The relationships Lara held with Kabran and Marc were also really interesting, and I'm glad she and Marc were able to help each other. :D

I do, however, feel slightly bad for Kabran. :(

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I really like this! Though I'm only through with the 2nd chapter, I think you captured the feeling of loss very well. The characters seem realistic enough, and your writing definitely draws the reader's attention. I am very anxious about meeting the mysterious stranger/ghost? Thanks for posting this up! It's hard to come by a supernatural/romance story here that is this good.