Reviews for Fight Thoughts
not the only deleted account chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
I can just feel the tension and the way you described the household yet didn't give details...I'm speechless.

I can just feel the pain.

And I can just relate to this in a way.

You have such a beautiful writing style and I love how you just pour such beautiful yet sad emotions into the piece.


Good job. You're such a great artist.
W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
thanks for sharing this poem. i think it gives a full-bodied glimpse at the household it is describing. you don't give details about the situation, which goes well with the unspoken tension beneath the shouting. the poem is genuinely sincere and personal. thanks again. i hope this review makes you feel loved!