|Reviews for deafeningsilence|
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
the lines where you took out the vowels slightly confused me, but i thought that was interesting
short poem, but it gets the point across nicely, good job!
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
i wonder if there's a literary term for the elimination of vowels. it's spiffy but i don't use it because no one understands it but maybe that's why you use it. lovely poem, dear. i'm sitting here listing devices you used & realized how pathetic that is. i absolutely love it. gack. dntfrgttwrtyrd.