|Reviews for Unvarnished Hope|
| Faye Coon chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Vintage is always a nice piece to any extensive collection...
Princess-Anna! I have heard so much about you, and you seem to have become quite a THANG, on fictionpress...
This perticular poem comes across as pseudo-imaginative...almost inspiring, only your words really lack depth, no metaphors, I mean it was well written and in sequence, but generally I dont much care for it.
I've tried to be inspired by stars but I just get a blank stare of indifference from those phantasmic lights...I wonder how people burn roses, fillet them on grills...maybe it's a joke... but Is suppose that your writing proves otherwise, it totally proves me wrong. And I know now why there was a renaisance. Keep writing, someone else is going to have a comletely different analysis than me.
| shadowed face chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Amazing, I love the relation between nature and emotions and how there's always signs to be seen, if only we look hard enough
| kamikazegirl chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Amazing, can really feel the emotion :) Keep writing.
| sourgummyworms2007 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
this is good
| Rafael Freire chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
that was cool (now i know whats unvarnished \o/ lol)anyway... keep it up, i like the way you bold some parts... :p
| TeaWithOnions chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
I like how you bold some of the lines, it makes the poem's message really pop out. I love it, its so beautiful and sweet.
| Captain Lucky chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Wow, I really like this one. It was really inspiring and very personal. (And thanx for your review!)
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
rhythm revision and stanza making would make the poem better because it looks and sounds like a big blob. i thought it was a good idea and full of emotions. nice work.
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
This was great! Really smooth and I don't know how else to describe it... human. Easy to relate to, nice job.
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
| kasey chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
i like it alot ... keep up the good work
| His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Beautiful title! You're really talented at free verse. It sounds just like a diary entry or something...really deep.
Keep it up!
| free-to-dream15 chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
wow, I've just got to say that I just love the title of this poem! I also loved "I've got to keep striving for my dream" oh and putting some of the words in bold was a very nice move. Excellent job!
| Black and White Dreams chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
That was so beutiful. A little too happy for my taste but, that's just me! Great job! Keep writing!
~Black and White Dreams~
| pixieofdarkness chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
very nice, i like how it tells a story,
| Cloudsinthesky chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
This poem really shows your understanding in life, the whole thing is very well written. Of course it is becasue I mean you wrote it! ha it sounds like I'm brown nosing but really you're such a great author...