|Reviews for Hanging By A Moment|
| abstractelysium chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Not bad... watch for cliches, though. Play with the lines you like the most, the ones you can completely call your own. Write around them. Make comparisons to strange but not unbelievable things, like a scar to a ravine, or a moment to a firefly. Keep what you like and stuff the rest. Enjoy it!