Reviews for Within Your Sea
chocohound chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
I like this poem, because it isn't often you come across something like this that isn't all "I'm sorry. I'll wipe all your tears away and make you feel better forever." (As a matter of fact, i think I probably have a few of those cliches...) Anyway, this one was original. I like the thought of drowing in someone else's tears, and not being able to help them.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/27/2006
Wow, this is tragic. So sad! Always be strong. Good poem, really well written. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!

~Anna~ _