|Reviews for Covet|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/18/2020
Came back to say I found your story in ePub format and bought it. Will start rereading as soon as I finish typing this. Thanks
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2020
It’s 2020 and 10:40pm. I’m awake trying to decide what I should read next and I remembered Covet. I was obviously younger when I read this for the first time and I loved Adrienne and Lucas’ love story so much that it stuck with me. Today I thought I should find this amazing story and reread it since it’s been so long. I couldn’t remember the authors name but as soon as I saw it I recognized this was it. I’m sad I won’t be able to re read your story since it’s been removed but I still remember bits and pieces and I can clearly picture the scenes in my head, feel the characters emotions and it is still the greatest story I’ve ever read . I see that changes were made afterwards but even so, I wish I had a published copy to reread anytime.
| PenMasterEm chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
Hi there. I know I may be a little late to give any input but I just wanted you to know that the 5 chapters I read were quite beautiful. I really liked the way you wrote about their passions and love. I'm looking forward to reading your future works.
| anon chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I remember when I first discovered Fictionpress and I think Covet was one of the first ten stories I read. I could never forget it completely, even though it's been years since I came back to it. This was the type of story that triggered all kinds of emotions and really scared me-it captivated me, even when I hated what was happening. I couldn't stop reading even when I wanted to, because I had to know what was going to happen. It's hard for me to be into a story as much as I was with Covet, because very few books have the power to pull you in when you don't want to be, when you don't agree with the storyline, when you can't empathize with some of the characters or understand their actions at all. Also, I'm SO happy you changed the ending from the biblical story. I couldn't have handled it if it followed that exact plot, and if you hadn't added the twists. I can't speak for the revised book on because I haven't read it and probably won't have access to it for quite a few years, but the original was amazing. I was never a huge fan of Damien, and I definitely liked Lucas-even later in the story, because the way you developed Lucas and Adrienne's love was beautiful, regardless of how it may have seemed short or incomplete. I think the fact that they had such strong feelings despite the short time they could spend with one another was what kept most of us going. Your original ending seemed fair, and man I really wish it was still available online :) One of my favorite emotionally-gripping scenes was when Lucas noticed Adrienne's necklace. It was such a raw moment with all this anger and emotion. I used to reread my favorite chapters so many times, and unfortunately it's been so long that I can't remember all the scenes that I liked but I don't think I'll ever completely forget this. Thanks so much for your amazing writing and I hope to [somehow] acquire the book..with my lack of money haha. I'm happy you got this story out there, even if it was by a non-traditional route!
| SoDivine chapter 6 . 11/14/2012
Hi, I've been following this story from the very first time you posted the first chapter here in FP. I've watched it change, read the endings, and let me tell you.. I still love the plot. It was like a fresh breath of air in the midst of all the teen cliches going around here.. which is why I understand why you'd decide not to repost it here. Wise decision.. as a graphic designer I can understand the pain of having your art stolen without your knowledge.. I wouldn't wish for that to happen to you or anyone.
Anyways, thank you for sharing your story again.. I'll try to buy a copy when I actually have money again lol. But just wanted to let you know that there are still some of the fans who followed since the very beginning. Good luck to you and what other projects you might have. Look forward to seeing more of your writing.
| Vampiyaa chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
this was adorable :)) so cute!
| Arc67 chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
in my opinion, i think the story is unfinished. i was expecting something else entirely...
It's amazing, by the way, but there's something missing... for me that is...
anyway... kudos to your work!
| dramalover21 chapter 6 . 9/9/2012
Been a fan of this story since before the first version of it was finished. Ordering my ebook copy right now :)
| queenjade chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
Oh man, i'm choking up here! that was BEAUTIFUL! THE single most beautiful story i've read on fictionpress.
Jade :) x
| tiltedHead chapter 2 . 5/30/2012
Aww, such a touching story
| Maia England chapter 5 . 4/23/2012
I adore the first few chapters of this story. Have you managed to get it published yet? I'm eager to read more, because that summary and these chapters really drag me into the story. I don't want to stop after just five!
| DofD chapter 5 . 11/10/2011
So so beautiful.
| DofD chapter 4 . 11/10/2011
Silly parents always expecting the worse.
| DofD chapter 3 . 11/10/2011
Please let him come back.
| DofD chapter 2 . 11/10/2011
It's such an amazing storyline.