I'm confused. Is this something you've already got published or something you're going to try to get published...

Cuz either way I still wanna read the rest.

I believe I read this story when you first put it up... and it's been on my Fav. Stories list ever since. I was very disappointed when a few months ago I decided to re-read it and I discovered you took it down... actually, come to think about it, I think you took it down right after I first read it.. because I remember looking for it and not finding it. It frustrated me. / I'm delighted that you've decided to try and get it published. :D I hope, one day, it'll join the countless books I have on my shelves. :D Good luck.

YOU'RE BACK! YAY!

Haha, sorry. I started reading Covet the year you took it down, and right after I finished it, it was removed. I'm so glad you're reposting it! Thank you very much!

I remember when this entire story was on here. I absolutely loved it. I wish i could read it all again

I can't wait to read the rest in book form. I loved the original and loved this version. Good Luck with your efforts and I hope to see it on the shelves soon! Please keep us updated! God Bless.

I wish you good luck with finding and agent and getting this book published! I hope you'll let us know how it goes, and when it's out, so I'll be able to buy it ;)

It really is a great story so I have no doubt it will be out on the book shelves!

Tina

By the gods... Why dost thou tease us so? To stop the story now doth cause a slight madness in my spirit... Lol!

This is really quite good and when u get it published, make sure to tell everybody! I'm sure we will all be lined up at borders ;)

Even if this is the last chapter i will be able to read for a while, I shall wander around and make sure I do not miss anything! ;) Ur writing is blessedly wonderful.

- L.3.O.

It's been a while since I reviewed haha.

I still remember bits of the original story and I still love it. The rewrite's done it a lot of good, though; there's a significant change in writing style in here. And I love it, too.

All the best in getting it published! I can't wait to read the book! (PS. Let us readers know if there are any changes in title, though. And the release date and stuff.)

I didn't think that this could get any better than the first draft, but alas! You will have no problem finding a publisher, and I look forward to seeing your book on a shelf at my local library! Best of luck to you, in all that you do.

GAH OH I CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU GET THIS PRINTED :D

So, I've been in love with this story since the first time you posted it, and was so sad when you took it off. But I cannot wait to read it when it gets published (because I am positive you'll have no trouble with that).

But, I have to be honest. There were some points of the story that I liked better in the first version. Such as how the characters' talked and interacted. Maybe it was because I had come to know the characters so well in that version, and they just seem so different now. Who knows?

But I wish you the best, and know that you'll definitely have one person keeping an eye out for the published version of this!

Good luck!

This chapter was well written, but I felt that it was a little different from your usual style. It was a bit... cliche. For example - The wind lifted up her thick waves of loose hair that had escaped her wimple. "You are beautiful," he whispered.

Adrienne teethed her lip. "As are you."

Those sentences made me squirm just a little from the corniness. I suggest adding in things to break the smooth cliche. I always thought the two characters were very playful with each other. Lucas could flash her a cocky smile, tease her a bit. I understand that this chapter was about the marriage and why you wrote in it this fashion, but it just felt different.

But anyways, aside from the cliche-ness, it was nicely written, very descriptive. If this is ever published I'll preorder!

Oh my god this was so good what are you going to update more or no or what? ah O_O I want to read the rest! XD ahck this means you're really good. I like the way you write. _ I hate you with love in a good way xD I can't even offer proper criticism because I just want to read more! XD

Really like this story, update soon, and keep writing!