Reviews for Covet |
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xFaithandTrust33 chapter 1 . 5/28/2006 YAY! It's back! I love this story! _ |
Lidiu chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 c00oll |
superficialowl chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 Good start but now I really want to know what happens next. Update soon! |
Black-Haired-Beauty chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 Well this sounds really interesting! Please update soon! I cant wait to read more! |
Arwen Starfire chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 o, this story is so sweet. u really should continue it. I was a little confused when you started to talk about King David, and the Witch King of Endor. Is Tisbeth and Lorien and Carmel all part of a make believe world, or is it suppose to be part of the real world? Did you get the name Lorien from Lothlorien in the Lord of the Rings? And what about the Witch of Endor? that too? |
WinterInTheAttic chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 I love this! It is so realistic and well written, and I couldn't tell what would happen next even in the first chapter. Amazingly done! I can't wait for more. |
Murasaki Blossom16 chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 O.O My gosh! That was so good! How come there's only one chapter? Please write more! I look forward to it! _ |
Eire Rain chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 Yay! *clicks to faves* :) |
SkateForLife chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 Aww cute! How old are they though? And good job |
Iris Early chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 Aww, that's so sweet. I very much liked your beginning - almost thought it was going to be something else until the next few lines caught me. You portrayed the children very well - lovely perspective. xx |
Phoebe Love chapter 1 . 5/27/2006 I'm glad this story is back. I love the interaction between Lucas and Adee. Feebs |