To be blunt and honest, i think it's an absolute shame you don't get many reviews. This is a great story, strong and very interesting. It's written quite well and, although some memory and present tense parts are a bit clumsy, you carry the mindspeak effortlessly, not a labour to read. I'm very, very disappointed you said that you were almost ready to update, but haven't posted since 2007. Not even to leave a note of absence. I'll watch out for you never the less, so please keep writing :)

:(... I can has update please? XD It's been like, what?... Year and a half? :/ I miss Ryance :( (I'm hoping that's his name and how it's spelled. I'm going off memory here, lol.) Makes me sad, homie.

God bless,

Chelsea .

PS - ... Whoa, it is so weird to think that that song came out more than a year and a half ago! D: Time flies!

Ahh! This is a pretty interesting story! You're past your deadline! Eek! Hehe I hope you update soon :)

aw, what happened to the 23rd?

brilliant story.

hey, this is pretty good

i like it

i just listened to the song and it was awesome. i love 3 days grace. the video sort of fits when angels cry as well. love the story so far. i wonder when she is going to learn that everything that has been told to her is a lie. can't wait for the next update!

That is an awesome song. Thanks for giving me another fave band. Can't wait for the update! :3 )

i like alex and abrielle together. but then i like her and ryance together. oh the possibilities!

um...confused? isnt this chapter 5?

Oh! Poor Ryance! I feel sorry for him. And seriously the whole scooping her up then flying and laughing was way sexy... Sigh. That was a fabulous chapter. I'm happy and anxious to find out what happens all at the same time. I'm sorry that you were so disappointed in it. Maybe I just loved it because it's been so long since I read this story... Anyway, I look forward to your next update!

Hiya! I liked Chapter 9. It’s pretty good. What a sweet reunion. What I didn’t like? You tend to get wordy, which slows down the story.

So what’s the status on the next chapter?

ohmygosh its like Violet Eyes! but not really. hm. more like Maximum Ride. except with prettier people. XD ah this is awesome. no stories like this on ficpress. cant wait for updates :]

UPDATE! I LOVE THIS STORY! UPDATE!

I've been slightly obsessed with this story from the start; I honestly believe you have a tone of talent for writing. The depth of the characters are some of the best, yet in the latest chapter there could have been a little description on Ryan otherwise it was near perfection to me (Which is almost impossible since I read so much and tend to compare a lot of work on FP with actual award-wining writers)

Have a wonderful day and keep up the grand writing (Can’t wait for the next chapter).

The simple book-obsessed-rather-crazed pyromaniac,

Kurro

Oh my gosh! I just finished reading this and it is fan-freaking-tastic! The best! I love it. I can't wait for you to update. This should be published, seriously. UPDATE! Soon please. I love Alex and Ryance, but I can't figure out who I like more...maybe Alex. UPDATE!