|Reviews for When Angels Cry|
| Ollie May chapter 9 . 2/7/2007
Stop worrying so much! This chapter was just as beautiful as the last ones although for a very different reason. This one was much sweeter but I think it was needed at this point in time. They hadn't seen each other in a long time and they would want to say everything they had to say in case they didn't get to see each other again. Which better not be the case, missy! lol, all in all I liked this chapter.
I am a bit curious though as to how Abrielle didn't get caught. I would assume that the doctors had the placed bugged with camera's and such although Ryance could have very easily disabled them.
Which brings me to Ryance: HOT DAMN. He's even hotter than before! Great imagery, I was practically drooling.
Thanks so much for updating and please please please update again soon!
| Angel of Ink chapter 9 . 2/3/2007
Is Alex a traitor or something? Because it says how strange it is that she can just get in there... does that mean he's working for the doctors? (
Anyway, I really liked this chapter. . Ryance is awesome... I would love to have wings!
| howfreakingflash chapter 9 . 2/3/2007
It was good! And cute. I think Ryance's enclosure sounds pretty neat. And it is odd that she didn't get caught...
| Aightynine chapter 9 . 2/3/2007
This story is probably one of my favorites because it isn't just romance-it is also science fiction. I liked chapter nine-I can't really see why you don't like it. I'm still confused about something though: is Ryance allowed to leave his room (if you can call it that) or not? At some points, it seems like he is not allowed to leave, but at other points, it seems like he is allowed to leave but just doesn't want to out of shame for his mutation. I suppose I will find out later, but it would be a good thing to explain if you weren't planning on it.
Keep up the good work!
| Rose Jameson chapter 9 . 2/3/2007
YAY SPECIAL COOKIES! I liked this chapter believe it or not. It gives a sense of...saftey. Yet I know there isnt any. I like it because of the emotions of 2 humans connecting in their distress. I dont know if you dont like it because it was fast paced. But I think it fits perfect because people do crazy things when there is fear and trouble envolved. So in other words I LOVE IT! I just about died from jumping in excitement over this chapter! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! and whole month! I dont know if I can live!
| hecate-dark-magic chapter 9 . 2/2/2007
i love this chapter... wonder who she'll choose in the end. update soon.
| elisefey chapter 8 . 1/25/2007
First of all, this chapter reads remarkably consistent with the first seven if it has been sixth months since you last updated! Wow. Anyway, I like the story. I think the plot is fun and fantastic. It totally keeps the reader wanting more.
So far I absolutely love Alex. I love the way he interacts with Abrielle.
As to what I think will happen next... I don't think that everything will go that smoothly with finding Ryance in the next chapter because that would just be too easy and this story is much more wonderfully complex than that!
I like your writing style, it's a solid, good read. You have some grammar and sentence flow problems that could probably be fixed if you tried reading what you've written out loud to yourself because then you'll notice if you have any strange phrasings or redundant words. Your dialog is great though!
Also, you pretty consistently write "of coarse" when it should be "of course". 'Coarse' sounds the same a 'course' but has the wrong definition. Other than that this story is really great! Keep it up! I think you got plenty of reviews this time! ;)
| Angel of Ink chapter 8 . 1/25/2007
Aw. Why does Alex have to like her? Why can't he like... AJ, or something?
Um, yeah, awesome story, by the way. I would love to have powers like that... but not if I had to be expirimented on and crap. :( That would make me VERY mad.
| elisefey chapter 6 . 1/24/2007
I think this chapter was the most exciting so far. I'm glad that I don't have to wait to read the next one because it's already posted!
| hecate-dark-magic chapter 8 . 1/17/2007
great story... i wanna know what happens to ryance and what will happen between alex and abrielle. ) update!
| howfreakingflash chapter 8 . 1/14/2007
I know you'll probably think I'm weird for saying this but, I love you for updating. [ You don't even know how much I like this story. Thanks alot and I love your writing style. I think Alex is really brotherly, in a way. And they eye idea was neat, I've always wished I knew someone with two different color eyes. Like Kate Moss.
| N.S. Blanchard chapter 8 . 1/13/2007
Yay yay yay. I'm sort of confused as to what's going on with her and Alex and Ryance. Is this going to be a love triangle or something?
| N.S. Blanchard chapter 3 . 1/13/2007
I, personally, really like this story. The progression is good, the characters are good, I particularly liked the prologue. Are we going to find out why her mom disappeared and all that?
| Rose Jameson chapter 8 . 1/11/2007
I LOVE YOU! do u know that? I LOVE YOU FOR WRITTING A NEW CHAPTER TO THE BEST STORY EVER! I've been waiting and waiting and waiting and NOW A NEW CHAPTER! hahahahahaha I could kiss u.. lol n a none weird only on the cheek way hehehe. I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! and ALEX If she doesnt want him, I'd sure take him, if he was real...sigh...hurry my dear and write more!
| Sargon chapter 8 . 1/11/2007
Please don't make me review 10 times lol
I heart your story and I heart you LOL
I like alex but we don't seen enough of his inner persona
same with AJ...
I heart you