Disturbing, yes. If you were trying to interpret your sickly manic depression, well done. Go see a counselor.

Oh, my... That sent shivers down my spine. This was so well writen. Creepy indeed. Oi! Probably not the best thing for me to have just read, for now I'm off to bed. I tell you thought I shall be back to read some more of your stuff. I think your writing is so discriptive. I love the vivid discriptions, the way you write so that all of the sences are covered. I can "smell" the death in this story.

~Marjorie

GREAT story wow. Thats about it. Keep the keys movin'.

Shit man...i thought i wrote some creepy stuff. Dude you are a true master of psychotic literature, and I would be honored to put you as a favorite author.

But besides that, it was great. I'm not sure what his relationship is to the Boss and the Bosses helper, but thats probably irrelevant. I'd love to read some of your other stuff man.

p.s. if you ever decide to read anything I've written, read Noreveaux first. its on the same lines as this piece, if you're into creepy you'd like it

Wow .. just, WOW ..

Rapunzel, you have a twisted mind. I like how you think ..

Somehow, you managed to make the audience sympathetic to the speaker .. and I applaud you for that. And yet, it's all so .. {creepy}.

You are a talented writer, Rapunzel. Although, it freaks me out to think that it might have been something I said that made this happen .. but it probably wasn't.

all my love,peter