Reviews for Never whole
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
i love the last line- ive felt this way too...another well written poem!
miss.aishaj chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
"You're nothing but a faded scar."

I really loved that line, it hit me straight across the face for some odd reason. Like it just popped out so violently at me that I nearly fell out of my seat.

You're really not who you're writing about in the poem babe, seriously. This isn't who you are. You're beautiful inside and out, and if you have to be a mark on someone, you're definitely a keyhole into someone's heart, not a regretted scar on their wrist.

I love you babe.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
BabooBaya chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
"Broken inside, never whole" ...beautiful! It's wrong to say, but i like the way you tell the person to rot away:P
Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
This is a very powerful poem...I like it a lot...I has great flow and great style...sorry I haven't reviewed you in a while... Keep writing forvever and always...

Jessica
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
wow harsh.. well written.. sad and powerful
AllyCred chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
I really like this, so much emotion and depth coming from this, its a wonderful piece and i just love every bit of it, speaks to me a lot, and kinda reminds me of myself! Well done!

I love it, love ya!xx
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
This is beautiful! One of your best pieces so far. I love the final stanza. Well done, so well written. Vx
xx 3DD Fan chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
This is written very well! I love it.