I liked the story (except for the spacing, it was quite hard to read in that respect. And the grammer could use a tiny bit of work)

But...the reason you wrote it orignally worries me slightly. I like violent writing, but saying you really wanted to do something like that. I'm sorry, I hope that you've gotten over those feelings. Killing people, even those who are stupid and foolish does nothing but make this world more of a pit.

Well..good writing!

That was really powerful, dude...I cant believe something made you so angry you wanted to gun down your whole school...greatest story I've read all month.

hey buddy. im just here to say that yeah maybe i dont have nothing to do. and i just thought i would give fictionpress a little more spice. yeah. see ya

oh by the way...your story sux ; )

Jesus hates you more than the devil does.

Come on Bro! You were the very first to read this when I first wrote it all that time ago! Now you come on to me with that "Not look at you the same way..." jab again. Disturbing.

-Go flip your Mattress Reaper.-

Enough with the personal digs, thanks for the review anyway man.

(Reaper and I are friends that go way back. Sorry for any personal arguements that may arise.

Not bad...not bad at all. I probably won't look at you in the same way but still...