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bemused scribbler chapter 1 . 7/4/2006
i like the format
Veronica Keeler chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
o i love oximorons, though i like how this one goes even deeper
Michael Kim chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Class 1 work of personal poetry, damn straight. Reminded me of Dorian Gray or some kind of other anti-hero.
Shadowed Echo chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
Wow. This is great I've added it to my favourites.
Rabid Violinist chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Oo, I like. Very dark and el-morbid. Very cool! _
criti-sized chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
This was a very nice poem that makes alot of peole think of the realities in which they have to go through. I especially love the line of "Rely on me, I will let you down" It seemed to carry alot of truth to it for those that have been let down continuously.

I also noticed that you'd changed your pen name, at first I wasn't sure who you were, then I recognized the poems and short.
Ellesmere chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
This really makes you think. I like the format of the poem also, very interesting. Good job with this.

~Ellesmere~