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theatrical rhapsodies chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
interesting. I like how you involved colors with emotion. It has a nice affect. but the lines "no more red./ no more pink./ no more shades of black./ no more red merging with the black pavement./ no more dreams of a cold face." might have been better if you had only put the colors and none of the details, for instance, instead of saying "shades of black" you could have said "black" and it would have painted a much nicer pitcher. but I did like some parts to it. I did. Good try. Keep writing.

Love, theatrical rhapsodies
onyxdragonflyy chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
Very well written!Great job!