Reviews for On the Earth
cannotthinkofaname chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
really, really, really well writtengood rhythm and flowi really like.. i dunno how to express it..the words you used?imagery?whateveri love it!really, really, really good!ending also really fits
Arichos chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
You really are in affinity for nature recently. I love the mood you set in this poem...it's really deep and thought provoking. awesome.
Mikioda chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Excellent imagery and syllabic use! (sp?)