Reviews for instrumentals on mute |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This...oh god, so lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The pacing in this is genius. I was enticed all the way through. The amount of power and emotion you've condensed into relatively few words is exquisite, just. Beautiful work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing style isn't one I'm familiar with, but I appreciate it all the same. I especially enjoy reading it aloud, and that one line "...the curl of smoke that traces your words like subtitles." Is definitely a favourite of mine now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this was so stunning and beautiful... no words now. |
![]() ![]() This is beautiful |
![]() ![]() Awe so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. And the fact that it's real, that it's written in the words of someone who has actually experienced it makes it all the more better. I meant to review every chapter, but I got caught up in this. I adore stories like this, especially yours. I wish you all the best with him :D - absentmindedprofessor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I've never had this experience, I can relate. Strange. I love your writing already. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING start. You've got me interested. I love this kind of prose - simple and yet brilliant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful, thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The sincerity of this was breathtaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is just stunning. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a beautiful collection of prose. I love how the shortness of each chapter leaves me hungry for more, as if I'm flipping through the pages of a novel, but also how the language reads like poetry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i hope you're really happy with him. he sounds pretty great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Greetings. ) I've just read this, of course. I find it very moving, quite emotional, as well, and I have to say that I've fallen in love with it! It's amazing, I'm, like, gob-smacked at the amount of feeling in this. Now you've said it's all truth just makes it more amazing and outstanding. It's short, bittersweet, and amazing. I feel I am repeating myself. I just wanted to post this to you, you probably may not read it nor care, but still, I wanted to review :) And to say thank you for an outstanding read. I enjoyed it. It was something I took seriously in reading, as it felt so real. Adios, Sincerely, Kimberley. |