|Reviews for child|
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Fascinating creation; you've weaved a lot of superstitions and myths about life into this, and all with the premise on 'the child'
I wonder if that is a metaphor for innocence; the innocence that we found this world and the harsh contrast that most of us leave it. Well done, I've never read a poem that took on this attitude. Keep up the good work.