Reviews for Awkward
Gatha chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Maybe you just have something in your teeth or something else about others would notice about you that you couldn't. You also said awhile back that no one notices the changes in you, but maybe now they are. And since when did you give three mississippis and a steamboat about what other people thought?
musicwriter2b chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
well my usual review is much longer than this: but hey, i like it. There's not much to say. It's feeling and it is well portrayed. Awkward is the koolest word. What can I say, though, my friend, you have a gift with words
divya chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
um dude. i never notice that. like, ever. you never seem that awkward at all..?
angeloftheninthorder chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
Such is the life of the "invisible"...the simplicity of the truths in here is astounding. perhaps because it describes me...but, that is just me talking. I loved it.
rainbowxcupcake chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
I liked how it flowed when I read it out loud. :D For some reason I was weird about the "AIDS-like" part. Perhaps there's a better adjective you could use? Anyway, though, I liked it.