This is VERY good! Your timing on every stanza is exact! Its wonderful! I could only find one little mispelling you had on there, and its a pickly little thing, so its not that big a deal.

"It’s hardly and hour ‘fore the girls reach the cove." - I believe the and is supposed to be an.

Thanks for the review on my story! Wonderful job!

I love it. The rhyming and flow works; nothing feels forced. Wonderful job.