|Reviews for Fantasy Fells|
| Rachel M. T chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
This is VERY good! Your timing on every stanza is exact! Its wonderful! I could only find one little mispelling you had on there, and its a pickly little thing, so its not that big a deal.
"It’s hardly and hour ‘fore the girls reach the cove." - I believe the and is supposed to be an.
Thanks for the review on my story! Wonderful job!
| S Cleveland chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
I love it. The rhyming and flow works; nothing feels forced. Wonderful job.