i liked this story. too bad it's been years since it was updated.

I was wondering when you're going to update?

I like this so far. Very interesting and I really like Monica. Don't want to see her get hurt...if she does.

i thought this was a unique way to start a story. it reminded me of 'jersey girl' although i'm sure their different. great start to i hope a great story.

This is an interesting story... I like the idea, and all of the character development...

I await the next chapter...

Let me start off by saying, great stuff!

The dad seems to be a real jerk, but at the same time after what he went through I can understand. I love how you establish the relationship between both father and daughter, btu it leaves the nagging question of whats REALLY bothering tyler...hope to find out soon!

Hey! I really like your story so far! The first chapter was a bit confusing, but then I started getting it.

It's a neat story line so far! Please write more soon, I wanna see what happens with Monica and that guy!

The first thought that comes to mind is that this seems like a very drama-filled fic, which is good. The summary-promised twistedness is something I'm looking foward to reading, can't wait to see where this one ends up.

Oh, and even though I'm sure nothing will come of it, your letter 'bout kutelizzy to the managers was awesome. Thanks for writting it, it'd be nice if she DID get banned one day...

Wow I think I can see where this is leading...but I dont see how this all ties in with Jasmine's dad. I'm sure you'll connect in somehow in a later chapter.

Besides that it was superbly written. I really like thr way you seemed to bring the characters to life through dialouge, im used to relying on descriptions for that. Impressive stuff, keep at it! I hope to see more!

(p.s. we have been abaondned by the webmasters. i tried getting kutelizzy's reviews off and their email was dead)

The beginning really caught my attention. Now I'm hooked, I really want to know what her father did that was so bad. Theres not alot to go by in this first chapter, but you've definily caught one fan for this work.

I really hope to see more soon _