wow you're a lawyer? Awsome, so if I get sued I can call you right? ;)Haha, but great chapter.

Omg! That freakin boy has a Audi?hmm, i want one. \

haha well Anyways, awsome story.

Hey! Poor Giada. I hope Jack and Giada will work out. Oh dear. Poor Giada. I'm surprised that she find out by her friend, Lana. Hurry update soon.

This was a /really/ great chapter - most likely your best for this story. Well, have a great vacation. I hope there's enough time for you to relax properly! _

- Lithely

this is great. it's horrible how.. stupid she is. but in the same situation I... well... no, i'm far too optomistic. hmm. but i can understand it. well write more soon~Mel

You're going away! YOU'RE GOING AWAY! NOO! I'll tie you down and make you write! No! ((pant, pant, pant..)) Sorry 'bout that. I really like the story. It's kinda creepy cause I've been playing out a story in my head for god knows how long and it's similar to this... And for the grammar mistakes, if you don't aready have it, get Mcrosoft Word. Don't go along with everything it says cause it's a little wierd, but it'll help. Or, I could be your editor! (James: That's just a plan to read the chapters early, isn't it? Me: Sh! Don't tell her!)

AH u'll be gone! fine *sigh* I guess I'll have to wait till u get back. Way to leave after such a big event EEKSS! hurry back lol have Fun

Can't wait til you get back from your holiday and can update!

wow. now that's original. at least, that's what i thought when i read the first couple of chapters, and then i got to the authors note where you said that this has happened to you, before... but, still, i think that this is an amazing story. despite the few typos that drift into the story, once in a while, and the fact that the grammar's not what MY english teacher would consider A material, i think all the technical stuff is fine. the little things didnt even bother me much in the beginning (though its sort of relieving that you went to using proper quotes, no offense) and the other grammar stuff is understandable. sometimes that stuff doesnt even matter, because description is always so good. you pointed out, before, that youre just writing this as something to relax with, but descriptions arent really bothering me, like they do with other stories. probably because i was so caught up with the love letters before, and then after that with sailerman, and now with whats going to happen between giada (pretty name) and jack. aanyways... update soonish, okay?

keep on writing ~~MWR-::-

No! I like Jack! Update soon!

ah! this chapter was REALLY great. and jack...wow...i used to hate him but now hes my favorite character in the story. poor giada...the way she found out must have sucked...well I LOVE IT! please update really soon!

o she found out! shocking stuff! good twists tho! keep it up. and have a nice holiday! rx

Argh, you can't let us 3weeks without updates, this is ending so... so... I'm at lost for a word strong enough... Anyway, they have at last kiss. I know it didn't go this good but at least they've , I wanted to tell you to add more of Jack's POV and to not put it only int the end of the chapters. Your story is realy good, it would be good if you make her go out with Zack just so to counteratack Jack's betrayal (from her point of vue) and then he comes, her knight in shinig armor, (I know, I'm a little bit caught up in my fantasy) saving her from the crushes of the handsome devil...

Wow, that was some chapter! Finaly she's seeing that Jack could be interested in her! and he... GO jack, now he just has to leave his charm work...

Hey! Wow! Poor Giada. I hope Giada is ok now without Jack. Damn Jack why cant he tell her truth? Oh dear. Poor Giada. Hurry update soon.