| Reviews for Love letters from California |
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  ski bird chapter 7 . 7/3/2007 so jack doesn't know either.. weird. it's more of a feeling thing that he hasn't accepted yet. good job. can't wait to see how he realizes it. |
| ski bird chapter 6 . 7/3/2007 pete is that possessive? he must be a good actor then to not show it at school... ok well that's kinda creepy. hopefully he won't act on it but it would be more exciting. haha. i'll read on. ciao. |
| ski bird chapter 5 . 7/3/2007 god i hope pete isn't obsessive over people.. but from the looks of it he is... how sad for giada. giada reminds me of this girl in this book... she got glasses or something. well never mind really good ;) |
| ski bird chapter 4 . 7/3/2007 jack giggled? hahahaha... and why does mike hate her? stupid boy... i mean there's no reason to feel like she's a parasite. |
| ski bird chapter 3 . 7/3/2007 god jake is such a jerk but why nice at the end and drop his facade? weird... how boys function.. anywho really good. |
| ski bird chapter 2 . 7/3/2007 seriously who wrote the message? i mean it would be jake but if u wanted to twist the story then it could be someone else... and god how rude is mike... |
 AJS chapter 25 . 4/13/2007 This is cute... but the ending seemed a bit anticlimatic? I don't know. i think you could have gone into deeper detail about what happened, the shock that she felt, etc. etc. It would have made it just that much more magical. I'm glad that Jack & Giada finally got together. She's Italian. I'm so jealous :p Haha for a while I was thinking that the guy writing to Giada was pretty damn sweet & that it was Jack... I was pretty shocked to find out that it wasn't. Ew. Possessive guys like Peter are disgusting -.-;; Zack is just... ugh. Ew. Yeah. Don't really have much more to say. I'm glad that the ending was happy :) - Alyssa |
| Fairytale Gurl chapter 15 . 4/6/2007 so good! i'll read the rest later! and leave a better review too lol |
| R.F.Y chapter 25 . 3/6/2007 wow, your writing really inspired me thx! |
| emerald chapter 25 . 3/1/2007 Wow. A fairytale it is; with growing up, learning to love, believe and just dream. Fantastic and fun plotline, it made my heart race, shudder and sigh. Good job. A little Mary Sueish and lovable hero. |
| youpin chapter 25 . 2/6/2007 LOVE IT. |
| Mimerz chapter 25 . 10/27/2006 I loved the concept of the story but I felt you dragged it on and kept repeating yourself. I know it's hard to imagine a guy liking you after 7 years of ignoring you but still it's not so hard to imagine after so many different signs and people telling you the same thing. You made her way to paranoid..I sometimes felt as if I was reading the same chapter over again because her same doubts were repeated over and over again. It actually got kinda annoying, you also have to go over and edit it because some sentences didn't really make sense. LoL sry if you feel like i'm bashing you because i'm not...this is a good story i love the concept just too dragged on. |
| SkateForLife chapter 26 . 10/24/2006 Ah! It was so good! I loved this story. Keep up the good work. |
| makinghistory chapter 25 . 10/18/2006 OMG I LOVED THIS STORY ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT AND I STILL LOVE UR OTHER STORY PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THAT ONE TOO! |
| B.T. Lines chapter 26 . 10/7/2006 This story was absoulutely fabulous! Very sweet, though a little unrealistic...though, aren't most stories? :) Anyway, it was great, especially since you aren't a native English speaker. Keep writing! |