Reviews for Lax Games |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was really interesting, I'm still not sure what we as a reader are meant to think, especially with the second chapter. But the two main boys have a lot of chemistry and potential . Random one shots through time if you ever feel like it would be interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I loved the second part just as much as the first, even though it didn't feature Mitchell and Nicholas as much as I would've thought... Anyway it's cute to read into Miller's with his protective attitude and what not. I am eager to read more even though it's been 3 years since part 2. A multi chapters story? :-) great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Remember that one shot that I read three years ago and really liked? That one that I randomly decided to re-read today? The one that blew my mind a little bit when I saw the next chapter button? Awesome update. I found it interesting that you decided to write from Miller's viewpoint. Will you randomly update this again in five years?d |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please write another chapter please |
![]() ![]() ![]() MAN, I love this story. I'm reading your story and I find myself either scowling, smiling, or just staring creepily. Poor Jacob! He's just trying to help his best friend and Nicholas is acting kind of like a douche! I like Jacob! I just hope that Mick doesn't turn out to be a total jackass. I can't wait to see what happens! I congratulate you and your brain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welcome back! Was happy to read your update and to see Hathaway and Johnson again. Hopefully your muse inspires some more chapters _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad that you decided to continue with this! It is one of my favorite one-shots here at FP, so I got kind of a chock when I saw that it had been updated. Thank you~ The main reason I like this story so much is the ambiguousness. It's very subtle what's going on, and that makes me determined to find out why. You know how to capture your readers. Another thing that's really good is that you don't give away too much of their looks. It gives the readers a more intimate relationship with the charcaters. But that's just my opinion~ I'd really love to see how this story's going to develop; I eagerly awaits the next chapter~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really interesting - quite a splendid read! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there more to it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was great! I love the tension, Nicholas' hesitation, Mick's attitude. Fantastic work. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, this seems like a really good idea. I like it. Really. It's sad to see that you haven't updated in so long. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love stories in settings which like this one are so very different from what I'm used to. I'm eager to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I very much enjoyed this! The tension was wonderful - I'd like to see more of the story, although I realize that's a long shot. It was nice to read something so perfectly put together, though. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gorgeous. I could picture it so well as a short film. Short. Realistic. Slightly gritty, yet with a feel good feeling attached. :) Very well done. |