Reviews for Timepiece
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/10/2006
i like this metaphor.. very unique at well thought out
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
now it makes sense. cool poem by the way. great job!
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
AH! i adore it! excellent/outstanding/amazing/oober fantastic/fantasmic(sorry it's a marching band word...)


a lonely september chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
this takes thought, the concept, the writing it, the reading it. but it's really well written and i like that. i had 'just the two of us' stuck in my head all thru the beginning cos the first line lol... nicely done, tho.
cornered.sensations chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
I loved the 'short hand' and 'longhand' theory, this was such a beautiful way of describing such a poignant romance. Keep writing