|Reviews for Evolution|
| knockmeoffmyfeet chapter 1 . 7/4/2022
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| anna Marry chapter 20 . 1/11/2022
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| Ind chapter 12 . 8/3/2020
I really don't know why school kids need to be involved in physical relationships which complicates everything. Ben physically being with Rachel and Page emotionally involved in him and him with her, that feel like putting a knife in Page's heart. Why no one is teaching self control to school kids. I just lost interest in this story with that. There are many stories by many authors like this. Which I can't understand and feel disgusted. Just wish things should be different for school going people atleast. They are supposed not to worry about physical relationships or their crush kissing or making out or having sex with others. That seems to be so overloading in a teenage crush stories. Felt like many hours I put into reading goes as waste now..
| Shailaputri chapter 6 . 8/3/2020
The way he lets his friends to humiliate her is totally very wrong. however minor it may seems it will hurt.
| Kat chapter 28 . 7/25/2019
Amazing! And really sad :( can we go back in time?
| dude chapter 1 . 7/24/2019
I really enjoyed this
| Cinnel chapter 27 . 6/3/2019
I AM SO HAPPY TO FIND THAT YOU'RE BACK.
I startes reading this years ago and for some reason, something made me check on this story.
I love it and I love you and I've never reviewed before but THANK YOU.
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/14/2019
Omg okay you have no idea how relieved I am to hear that you’re going to continue this story. I am devastated when I start reading a new story just to find out that it hasn’t been updated in years/most likely discontinued. I am so in love with your characters! AND OMG YOUR HUMOR, YOU KILLED ME WITH THE “seance to contact my dead immune system” like I’m totally using that whenever I’m sick. Really love your writing, character progression and story line. Can’t wait for me!
Lots of love xx
| RedXButterflyXBlooming chapter 27 . 4/13/2019
I am so pumped for this new chapter! Thank you so much! Can't wait for more!
| Lily chapter 27 . 4/10/2019
If you don’t finish this story, I think I’m going to cry, okay?!
| aeparker55 chapter 27 . 4/6/2019
I have really enjoyed this story. I just recently started reading it for the first time. The beginning was a bit slow and lacked description in places but the further i got into the story the more i was drawn in by the characters. I found myself crying and laughing with them. I think your writing has improved from the first chapter to this one. I hope you keep up the great work.
| Acie chapter 27 . 4/4/2019
Im super glad you're back!
Poor Page,losing someone is always hard
| Beauty and Bleeding chapter 27 . 4/4/2019
If i knew all it took was a review to get an update I would have done so ages ago! I come back and re-read this every few months, lol.
So happy they finally got together! I wonder how they'll screw it up- though I'm sure they'll get through it.
I really hope her dad isn't dead... D:
Thanks for the update!
| Kat chapter 27 . 4/4/2019
Love it, as usual! I’m so excited that they’re finally together! And that Ben actually realizes he can’t be that awful to her. Yay! But sad about her dad - why do you do this happy-sad thing? :(
| Acie chapter 26 . 3/12/2019
The storyline is great and the characters have home through so much development. Please come back to finish it